content: Thanks!!! :)  my only critique would be the out of sync jump cuts  Can you tell me what you mean with out of sync? Didnt I cut on beat?     I would definitely keep them, possibly with a slight reduction.   Yeah I really think I should reduce the number of cuts, especially at the kayaking part!    Excellent job on the 'grilling' label but why is it the only one?  It wasnt, I had a kayaking lable on the begining, also the name of the town but I cut both out for the youtube upload because I thought it would be a worse intro then just nothing, atleast when you dont have to context that my school has. I left the "grilling" lable because I really wanted to keep the shot under it and for that I needed the lable, otherwise it wouldve looked random.    do you have a bigger plan for the final?  Well honestly the final is grilling again, but this time with way more interesting/more footage and a great outro. Our job was to show all the nice free recreation activities that you can do in my hometown but we ended up just going kayaking and grilling twice :p Thanks again for the feedback!