I appreciate your critique.  I only added the Go Fund Me link in case anyone thought the work I put into my essay was worth a dollar or two.  Normally, I wouldn't do this but desperate times call for desperate measures.  It was VERY difficult for me to ask in the first place.  I normally to proud to ask but in my current condition I don't have any other options.  Sorry if I offended you.  Please accept my apologies.  God Bless.