Account Deleted By User Thanks for all the ideas. I came up with a better storyline after picking form all the suggestions everyone here had. The book is free for all to read. My intention is not to make money, but to inform people of the dangers of obesity and hopefully shock them into losing weight. A future like the one presented in this book awaits us if we do not change our habits for better.  Updates are weekly or biweekly, depending on how fast I can come up with ideas or how much homework I have to complete. You don't have to create an account to read and I am currently looking for other sites to host my book on. Until then, Wattpad seems to be the best place because it is free, after all.  book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/129398855-hamageddon